Clearing Webs: Another Poem by Gideon

October 15, 2008

Another Poem by Gideon

I Hope

by Gideon Perkins

I hope that a tode will cum
and he did but he had a sily bum.

The original work.

Posted by lynnp at October 15, 2008 11:15 PM

Comments

Is that perhaps, 'toad'? I see a 'bum' pattern developing in his poetry....must be a masculine thing...

Posted by: Mom at October 16, 2008 5:14 AM

I left his spelling as he'd originally written it. "Tode", "cum", "sily" were the only misspellings. I can't believe how his spelling has improved in the last two months.

Posted by: lynnp at October 16, 2008 12:16 PM